Sleep

A moment Taken Paralysed Yet I dream of many worlds! Adventure Terror Thrills Almost as if its Real? Cocoon Peace Rest Waken totally Refreshed! Where does that curling inevitable moment take you? X

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2016 1:33:00 PM

A Warm welcome to Poetry Soup Gail. Whenever anyone tells me they are new I like to go and read their first poem. Sometimes when dreams feel really real I think they may be from a past life memory. This poem is a wonderful first post. It is both imaginative and questioning, prompting thought about our own sleep travels. Aloha, Connie ; )

Jane Allen

Date: 8/22/2016 3:09:00 PM

Hi Gail, really enjoyed this poem. Lovely use of language evoking thoughtful imagery and creating a lovely tempo.

Gail Lewis
Date: 8/22/2016 4:57:00 PM

Thankyou Jane that's really nice of you love xx