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Sky Smiles

Sky Smiles Whimsical weather wandering Torn pieces of cloud in the sky. Sometimes Sun shines, sometimes drizzling. Whimsical weather wandering. Yet drowsy Sun is still dazzling. Scary birds do not dare to fly. Whimsical weather wandering. Torn pieces of cloud in the sky Sun rays dispersed through rain droplet. Semi-circle rainbow glistens. Inner arch shows vivid violet Sun rays dispersed through rain droplet Outer bow is painted scarlet. Leaves murmur in breeze, sky listens. Sun rays dispersed through rain droplet. Semi- circle rainbow glistens. 07/23/16

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Date: 7/25/2016 7:39:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:10:00 PM
lovely imagery and alliteration:-) congrats on your win Anisha:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:24:00 PM
I love your description of a prism as 'sun rays dispersed through rain droplet.' Well done, Anisha.
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:18:00 PM
Anisha, a wonderful poem and Congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/24/2016 5:23:00 PM
This is quite original. love that you did stanzas of triolet. Such a lovely form. I really loved your phrases: sky listens and torn pieces of cloud..
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