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Sky Flies With Bird's Wings

a genius village head master also teaches says one plus two's four there's a dull student wrote one plus two's three and failed unfit for that school wrong's right for many drain brain problem what to do? sky flies with bird's wings

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Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/17/2015 2:42:00 PM

I'd choose the bird filled sky as well.. what a wondrous way you have with words, BL....:), jill

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/10/2016 9:03:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Sorry for late. Loved always,bl

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 9:00:00 PM

A lovely write. SKAT

Bl Devnath
Date: 11/8/2015 8:15:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:11:00 AM

and some do not like to be corrected, thank you for the read my dear BL, ~Luv Linda

Bl Devnath
Date: 11/8/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thanks my *friend for your excellent comment and credit. You have rightly caught the hidden meaning of the poem. This is done out of my own practical experience in day to day dealing with some people. The theme is much broader. Loved always,bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2015 7:15:00 PM

introspective write in a subtle way, bl...praise be to good mentors unlike this one... huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/29/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation with a nice comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2015 2:06:00 PM

amusing but also sad BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/28/2015 2:18:00 PM

Yes, my lovely friend. Please, don't be serious, but practically happens in political worlds. Smile and laugh ha ha ha....both with cheers. Most of them misguide and innocent people also talk the same language of their tongues, so said a village.You are invited to India to enjoy this nice game. Thanks for your comment. Loved always,bl