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Skin

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Skin

You send bolts through my skin 
something I was never to 
accomplish with you, when I 
saw you it's like my heart sank 
to my stomach and I was in 
shock my body still my body 
heavy felt like when I moved I 
was about to fall to my knees 
you make me want to get 
inside my brain pick you up and 
take you out pick you one by 
one like a flower because I do 
love you and love you not.

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Great poem, very good form and much use if imagery! :)- Edward

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Think of the Daisy and all the truth it holds in it's center, we are so much like flowers dear heart, so much like flowers, we bloom when the sun rises our petals and we wilt when the rain comes to cave us in, as sure as the fact that every season follows the other, we too must follow nature, we die and we rebirth, Love to you dear heart xxxvxxx

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    Date: 7/5/2013 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are amazing thank you
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:09:00 AM
    h