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Sister To you sister - I want to say - that I love you, just as you are. I don't expect you to change. You are alright just as you are. I will not criticize you if you make mistakes. I will only try to help you, if I can. If you reach your goal in life. I will be happy for you. If you you have problems, I can not solve them for you, but together we might find a solution. If we are walking together and you stumble - I will give you my hand so you won't fall. I can not live your life for you, we were each given a life of our own. All I can do, is be there if you need me. If your heart gets broken - I can not fix it, but together we can pick up the pieces. If one day I hurt you, I will apologize. If you want to stay away from me - I can not stop you. All I can do is give you my blessing and wait for you to come back. So dear sister I want you to know, that you are special and always will be. When you get lonely, sad, or blue - call me. I will always listen to you...
10/22/2012 Written by lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:12:00 AM
    this is lovely, reminds me of the Hollies, he ain't heavy he's my brother, same theme same sentiment.. but written with your own special touch.........

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 10:46:00 PM
    What a lovely piece you have written Lucilla, commiting yourself to your dear sister. She must be one lucky sister to have you so dedicated to her. I feel the same way about my youngest sister. thanks for visiting and for the sweetest comment you have made. One love my friend. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:43:00 PM
    Everyone should be blessed with a sister like you, Lucilla...wonderful description of unconditional love - Tim

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:16:00 PM
    You sound like a great sister, I hope all your prayers come true and sis comes back to you. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:04:00 PM
    Great work of being supportive of another human being..If only we could be all those to our fellow man..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:01:00 PM
    Beautiful piece!! Well written and a special piece from your loving heart. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:05:00 AM
    Glad to hear you are four sisters and sorry about the one. I've not had to lose any of my four yet. I am the oldest, so maybe I'll be the one first lost one day. (at the rate my health is going, I would not doubt it)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:38:00 AM
    This is so sweet, very wonderful and lovely wite Lucilla, my dear friend. I was in tears while reading it. How I wish I have a sister to love her as much as you do. So touching! Thank you so much for sharing. Love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:56:00 PM
    very poignant and tender - nice!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Hi Lucy, a well done dedication... I have 6 sisters, 2 passed,,, 3 went rouge,, but, i am close to my younger sisters... I will not stay mad that long when it comes to them...that is true sisterly love... i love your are a great sister... always...pd

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Do you have just one sister? I have four and I love them a lot like you do yours in this lovely poem!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Truly a beautifully written poem!! Lucilla you are a very good, kind and supportive sister!! My sister is not so ...... I can get a new one??? - You??? My sister and I is like dog and cat. - She is "princess" and I'm her door mat. - :) :) :) Have a great new week Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)