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Since You'Ve Been Gone

Morning seeps in through my window. I have spent all night long deprived of dreams. No sleep either. Too lonely here without your arms that comfort me; wrap me up. Never appreciated you till you left. I miss you with your quirks; that quick smile. The way you sing to me. Come home soon. for contest "Trickle Down Free Verse"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/27/2013 3:13:00 PM
I can certainly emphasise with this one - lovely write too : )
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Date: 7/23/2013 10:57:00 AM
bullseye.. the cadence of this work ebbs and makes waves in the end.. superbly done, deb!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/23/2013 8:24:00 AM
The longing in these lines are understood and strong. Excellent job!
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Date: 7/23/2013 3:26:00 AM
- Deb, so loving thoughts ... Love it! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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