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Simple Pleasures Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman As the rain falls slightly against my bedroom window, I pull my covers up and tuck my head in the pillow. I walked through my favorite shopping mall center, Heard our special song and can't believe I remember. When my hubby lost his job times sure were tough, Cleaning out my purse I found a twenty by my glove. On my morning walk I passed pretty white lillies, They remind me of my sister and how she's still with me. Later when I look back at my day of simple pleasures, I lay my head down grateful for my simple treasures. Date Written: January 15, 2016

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Date: 1/28/2016 3:57:00 AM
What a pleasure to read Laura.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really like this! A 7
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Date: 1/27/2016 12:06:00 AM
Great Write. Congrats Laura to win. Anisha D
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:53:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thank you lovely lady Jan *smiles*
Date: 1/26/2016 3:30:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura! Congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Kim, I enjoyed the contest! *smiles*
Date: 1/17/2016 4:28:00 PM
Your poem was one of this days simple pleasures. Well done. BG
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:44:00 PM
Aw thank you very much :) *Smiles*
Date: 1/15/2016 6:49:00 PM
I adore this kind of writing and I adore simple pleasures!!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, you are always so sweet and I always appreciate your kind comments...be blessed *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/15/2016 2:55:00 PM
- .... tiny drops of enjoyment, a lovely poem Laura - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, may you also have a beautiful weekend! *smiles*
Date: 1/15/2016 11:20:00 AM
your splendid piece dives into the pool of sweet pleasures,laura ... great stuff
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette, I appreciate your kind comments :( *smiles*
Date: 1/15/2016 10:45:00 AM
The little things in life mean so much LuLoo. You describe such lovely simple pleasures and precious memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Jan, have a blessed day lady :)*smiles*

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