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In a busy world I don't take for granted simple pleasures like snuggling with a loved one on a chilly winter's night Saving keepsakes of the things I collect and call treasures. Finding myself in the dark until someone turns on a light. I'm pleased that my children still come to me for advice Happy with the blooms, from bulbs I planted last year. It's wonderful when a dear friend does something nice... like seeing me crying, then gently wipes away my tear. Sugary kisses from my grandchild placed on my cheek as sweet as the bite of a warm cinnamon bun with icing Soft rain like mist is a gift from Mother Nature that I seek and hoping to fall in love makes romance sound enticing. Before rising in the morning I enjoy a long languid stretch Being the giver instead of the one who takes in greed Liking the end results of charcoal portraits that I sketch Having a stranger return my smile is a pleasure, indeed. Being gifted with a bouquet of flowers for no reason at all Having a thirteenth doughnut thrown in for good measure Being able to stand and walk after taking an emotional fall Building faith in God overflows my heart with pure pleasure. * * * * January 20th, 2016

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Date: 1/28/2016 12:00:00 PM
Once again you have spun a lovely bouquet of colorful words, my pen friend. I so love the last stanza (Having faith in God fills my heart to overflowing with pleasure.) Awesome write, Lin. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. God Bless.....Sharon : )
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:19:00 PM
I thank you for so many lovely comments, Sharon.
Date: 1/28/2016 4:06:00 AM
Yet another lovely win Lin.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Upma. ;)
Date: 1/27/2016 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. ;)
Date: 1/26/2016 7:28:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your nice win, Lin. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra..Hugs.
Date: 1/26/2016 4:39:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:17:00 PM
ok...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2016 5:21:00 PM
Lin, please ignore the repeated comment. P Soup kept telling me "wrong code"--so I kept sending. Janice
Date: 1/26/2016 4:38:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice.
Date: 1/26/2016 4:38:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thanks very much, Janice.
Date: 1/26/2016 4:24:00 PM
A wonderful picture of what simple pleasures are to you! My favorite part was the first two lines of stanza 3. Nothing sweeter! Congrats on your placement in my contest, Lin, and thanks for participating! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:27:00 PM
They were my favorite too, Kim. Thanks for a fun contest.
Date: 1/21/2016 4:32:00 PM
beautiful write Lin, your simple pleasures are indeed lovely
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:56:00 PM
don't mind that Lin, it happens, i saw the comment trying to hide too but i couldn't push it to view lol....congratulations dear one, the poem was well written and lovely
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/26/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sage. I'm sorry I didn't see your comment before today. ;(
Date: 1/20/2016 7:42:00 PM
Wonderful 'simple pleasures', Lin, and so wonderful how you present them in your lovely poem. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/21/2016 9:01:00 AM
You're comments are always so very kind, Sandra. Thank you. hugs back to ya!
Date: 1/20/2016 9:53:00 AM
When I find something I thought I lost I think "There is a God"! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2016 10:12:00 AM
Hi, Matthew. What a coincidence you should mention that one! It was on my list but my 5 verses were filled too quickly to include it. Thank you so very much.
Date: 1/20/2016 8:44:00 AM
Lin, I enjoyed reading about your simple pleasures. This piece was flowing with positivity.Well done. Best of luck in the contest-Alexis
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Date: 1/20/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. I think we could all list so very many things that we consider simple pleasures.
Date: 1/20/2016 8:42:00 AM
Lin, oh how beautiful, your poem touched my heart and soul, so wonderfully penned, a true winning poem for me, I love this write so much, well done ~
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2016 10:17:00 AM
Many thanks for your lovely comments, Constance. You made me smile~another simple pleasure!

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