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Silent Night

The night seems so still and revered by many, Tranquil shadows of the half moon above, Heavenly halo's of peace and plenty, Full of joy and the release of turtledoves. We all gather while holding hands, All strangers from my neighborhood, And as our circle of trust quietly expands, The reason for this day is instantly understood. For the birth of our Savior Jesus Christ, Has brought a bright star in the sky, All shall follow it until He arrives, While the shepherds wait and angels cry. "Alleluia" has been sung and heard, The Virgin Mother has brought us a child, Oh, how our prayers have been answered, A gift so big for the world, yet so mild. The night seems so still and revered by many, Calming sensation throughout the universe, Seems like a dream or formal imagery, I am so humbly immersed and undeserved. Holy and sacred, consecrated yet small, Our dear Savior has come to save us, As we all sing “Peace and joy to us all", Watching the sun settle falling into dusk. Based upon the Christmas Carol "Silent Night" 12 December 2015

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Date: 1/8/2016 3:45:00 PM
So lovely Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:01:00 PM
congratulations dear
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Date: 1/4/2016 4:42:00 PM
Beautifully expressed here, Laura. What a wonderful way to start the New Year by reading this winner. Congrats to you!
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:41:00 AM
Laura, congrats on your Christmas Carol. SKAT :)
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:36:00 PM
Such a lovely poem that presents the awe and wonder of that night in Bethlehem and our special "Silent Night" hymn. Congratulations on your nice win, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:17:00 PM
You truly captured the essence, Laura! BIG congrats on a marvelous win.
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Date: 1/3/2016 4:17:00 PM
Enjoyed this Laura, congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/3/2016 4:01:00 PM
So very lovely - a joy to read. Congratulations on your win, Laura ... CayCay
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:19:00 PM
Laura,I really enjoyed your wonderful poem : ) beautifully written! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:40:00 PM
Yours is truly a lovely Christmas Carol, Laura! I have missed many inspired poems lately....glad this one is on the winners' list for I might have missed it completely! Congratulations!! ~ All the best ~*~ paul
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Paul :):) You are always so kind to me, it is very much appreciated *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/3/2016 1:30:00 PM
A beautiful interpretation of the song, Silent Night... Very well written with a smooth flow and rhyme and nice imagery. Congrats on a win, Laura!
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:32:00 PM
Many thanks Kelly, I am honored. I really enjoyed your contest! Thank you :)-luloo Be blessed!
Date: 11/30/2015 8:09:00 PM
Laura, your amazing write complimented the song really well. You painted a beautiful scene with words and it was such a lovely sight. Great job! Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 11/30/2015 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Alexis :)-lu *smiles*
Date: 11/29/2015 8:22:00 PM
Hi Laura, I miss reading your poems. A beautiful and wonderful feeling. the imagery is one of the best I've read today on my return. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/29/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Linda, I hope you are all well? Nice to hear from you today! :)-lu *SMILES*
Date: 11/29/2015 5:06:00 PM
a lovely quatrain Laura good luck in the carol contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan :) *smiles*

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