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Silent Hero

Forcing me to linger on I hated every breath Like knives forced down my throat What had I left to live for? Rejected by my parents Called a freak by my friends What motivation is that? But then I met you You saved me from death You made me want to live You were a silent hero But you will never know: I do not only love you I an forever in your debt For saving me from myself

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2015 4:40:00 PM

Makayla, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/7/2015 9:53:00 AM

Hi Makayla, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita

Francis Osho

Date: 12/4/2015 8:42:00 PM

that was well expressed from the bottom of your heart.i loved it. thanks

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2015 8:23:00 PM

Makayla, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT