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Silent Heart

Take your hat off and you shut the door Place your lunch can on the kitchen floor There are no messages on the telephone Another evening to be all alone Wishing that you had more time to spend Never thought that it would ever end Life they say has its ups and downs Stories written by circus clowns Love was ours until death do part Still feel the beating of a silent heart Empty arms outstretched in the rain untouched lips that cry out in pain Lie alone upon your double bed Touch the pillow where she laid her head In the darkness you seem to be so weak Feel the teardrop running down your cheek Alarm goes off and you begin your day Wishing the pain would somehow go away Same routine each day an endless storm Only memories left to keep you warm Loneliness refuses to depart But you find comfort in a silent heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2012 1:06:00 PM
Another beautiful piece of writing! Very moving, wonderful presentation of story. I also enjoyed your Unity poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:54:00 PM
This is a beautiful write Vince...a very touching piece...smiles...chiquita
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:35:00 PM
Wow, very touching and true.made me cry...Thanks for all the comments..
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Date: 5/30/2011 1:36:00 PM
An enchanting love poem that touches the heart. Your remarks on my poem Obstinate Heart is so true. -Mohammad
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:51:00 PM
rated now
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:49:00 PM
This poem broke My heart...Sad and beautiful... we all fear the loneliness after...just beautifully expressed, my friend!!! Love, Iolanda Thank you for your nice comment several days ago...
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:05:00 PM
Sorry to say I'm right here in the lonely room with you! Great write Vince, it's REAL a good one for my contest [but I so sorry you feel like this!] Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:37:00 AM
Magnificent write but so very sad Vince. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:42:00 AM
Heart-wrenching, Vince. I wrote a sonnet, 'The Rose and the Thorn', much along the same line. I know these feeling all-to-wll. Hugs, Lainie
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Date: 4/13/2011 7:17:00 PM
oh my stars, vince... how you could merge logic with emotions stuns me... i melt in the bittersweet sentiments of this towering piece... best of winning wishes to you... a fav of mine for the contest! :) huggs, nette
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