Silent

In dreams I have learned to drift Taught by hands throwing shadows As I dance with my parasite Gleaming from the dark river running I know that look I know that song It's so simple to turn my head And listen to my own passing Silent to my own ears But a true deafening cadence Whose words are but water Cascading down my throat Soon it will be 58 years And from this dream I will awake

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Skat A

Date: 6/16/2016 6:55:00 PM

Nice to see this again...skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2015 7:01:00 PM

Daniel, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/22/2015 5:49:00 PM

Hi Daniel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT