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Silence of Him

The Silence of You The clock strikes Another hour gone by Forever lost In the darkness of eternity. The rain falls Lightly tapping on my window Softly lapping- As if it just wants me to listen. I feel the surge of energy Run from my head to my toes My heart racing My palms sweating. The sensation of the blade Cold Hard Raw Makes me shiver. It runs slowly Along my neck Tempting me- teasing Just begging to be used I hear the thunder roar The leaves rustle in frustration I ruin my fingers along The handle. As I dream Of an imaginary reality I lose myself for a moment Consumed with memories Of You. I savagely slice my heart Open I scream as blood pools around me Holding me prisoner. I am lost In pain It owns me To it I am a slave. As I feel the blackness Filling my mind I see your eyes I feel your heart. The passion, love Now untouchable Then comes The Silence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2010 12:49:00 PM
by the way you wrote this i am guessingyou wanted the reader to visualized you pain, it worked because i thought that the descriptive imagery on this poem was excellent! nice poem, sad tale, beautifully written! Jo
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Date: 2/23/2010 11:49:00 AM
Very descriptive, welcome to the Soup dude! peace, love and hairgrease, ~$@V@^^@#~ Savannah
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:18:00 PM
Wow I have a very similar poem. I loved this piece, kept me glued to the screen; yearning for more. Read my poem, you will the similarity.
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Date: 2/22/2010 7:20:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight.. enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie.."Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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