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Below is the poem entitled Silence which was written by poet Jonathan Bellmann. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Beneath the waves I sank; darkness surrounded me
Silence wrapped its hands around my strangled plea.

Copyright © Jonathan Bellmann

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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Jonathan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:09:00 AM
    congrats on a great write and a great win Jonathan

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:38:00 AM
    Congratulations Jonathan , I like the take n this xx

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:47:00 PM
    The silence would be absolute in the sea. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 9:01:00 PM
    JONATHON;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:42:00 PM
    Rather scary, I felt claustrophobic reading it and could feel the cold water. I am always afraid of deep water. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:15:00 PM
    A great write indeed, with imagery that tells a story and then some. Congrats on this great win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 2:18:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..((()))!!!Sara

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:51:00 PM
    I really like yours, jonathon, as I go thru the winners' list. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Very well done, Jonathan! Powerful! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim