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Significance of Rain

Some say its a blessing, Some say he's just angry, Some say he's crying, Some say it's just nothing Dancing off the ground creating a vast puddle, Rushing down the edge of the curb, Cars zoom by as if the driver is in a rush Couple's in the living room cuddle Taking away the pain, some call it rain Questioning their lives, questioning why ... Dreaming Leaving one thoughtless, mind clear like the glass on the window pane Others are angry because it ruined their plans, Little do they know a blessing was the plan, Thank God that you are alive to see another day, After all when the storm is done, a rainbow reminds you of the promise he made Some say its a blessing, Some say he's just angry, Some say he's crying ... Think About It -- Its just a Promise kept alive , never dying

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Date: 7/4/2010 10:30:00 PM
I loved this poem it is really great.
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Date: 7/3/2010 10:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rebecca. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:04:00 AM
great thoughts, and welcome to poetry soup again!
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:43:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation...
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Date: 6/30/2010 2:53:00 PM
Without rain, nothing grows. Nicely written. Vince
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Date: 6/30/2010 2:40:00 PM
sure have to have the right perspective about the storms of life excellent poem
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