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sign of a goddess

My jaw dropped and my eyes ventured perfection 
Nomadically discovering forbidden curves and a taste-worthy complexion
Heels highlighting slenderized yet voluptuous thighs 
A gentle profoundness defined within the iris of her eyes
This truly would be a Greek tragedy if I let this goddess get away
Thoughts play hopscotch with varied selections of what to say
By chance her eyes took an interesting glance
A sign!!!
It’s safe to say she’s gonna be mine
All I needed was a sign

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  1. Date: 5/2/2009 6:42:00 AM

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 9:59:00 AM
    I love the: A sign!!! a powerful gasp came through to validate continuity. Peace and love

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 4:16:00 PM
    And A sign I hope you got, someones smitten here! Great Write! Laura :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 8:07:00 AM
    I really like it. I can see it now if I could smell it???? Don't forget the rest of your sensory repertoire. I want to move up "A sign" since the rest of the lines are grouped in couplets. And perhaps just for emphasis, separate the last line the finale. PS I am so happy you like my writes yet you have my encouragement to critique!!! Pleaseeee! PSSS see me on my knees, a chair poem for the Contest Please? Light & Love Debbie

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 4:10:00 AM
    Love this brother.. A lot of cool writes throughout the piece..I love the hpscotch line ..sweet...the opening was done very well. really cool write.

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 11:29:00 PM
    Hmm, got your eye on a Goddess huh? What can I say...go for it! good imagery and write James.