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Sight of Winter and Spring

The ice sheets on lakes are slowly thawing; the sight resembles a glass separating the water world from the dry world. Green is gradually dominating the white that covered the trees. Snowmen are slowly disappearing, melting away into the earth. Icicles glitter like diamonds in the faint sunlight, glowing in the midst of clouds. Legends about snow monsters and snow people are losing taste to children; they want stories about mysteries that spring carry with it. Earth oozes with the scent of rebirth. Easter bunnies are appearing everywhere in the shops, their Easter eggs surpassing chicken eggs in numbers. We are in Winter and Spring... Date: 16/03/2016

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Date: 4/6/2016 11:10:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda!!! *^_^* <3
Date: 4/4/2016 8:12:00 PM
Nice take on the theme, Teddy. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/5/2016 3:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra!!! *^_^*
Date: 4/4/2016 2:41:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Give me the snow monsters and the snow ghosts but then give me the Green man and the elves of the green woods. You give a different take on Winter and Spring that i did enjoy. This one gets a seven....Mike.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 6:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece Mike!!! :-)
Date: 4/4/2016 11:57:00 AM
Teddy, your ideas amaze me! Congrats!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Balveen, for your applause!!! :-)
Date: 4/4/2016 8:56:00 AM
Teddy I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 5:57:00 PM
Wow! Thanks Hans! It really feels good to know I'm inspiring people out there... Thank you for your kind comments :-)
Date: 4/4/2016 3:02:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Teddy..
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma!!! *^_^*
Date: 4/3/2016 12:18:00 PM
Very good poem. Enjoyed reading. Congrats...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 2:22:00 AM
Thank you Probir, for your applause and enjoying my verse!!! :-)
Date: 4/3/2016 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations Teddy on your placement in the contest.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 2:20:00 AM
Thanks Daniel!!! :-)
Date: 4/3/2016 8:06:00 AM
such lovely imagery Teddy - love the Easter ending:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you so much buddy!!! *^_^*
Date: 4/3/2016 6:54:00 AM
congrats on placing Teddy love the Easter bunnies verse hugs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Shadow!!! *^_^*
Date: 3/28/2016 2:28:00 PM
Hi Teddy, I agree with T.J. about the Spring but i do have a Love for the winter months also. Winter where the world sleeps in a white cocoon, Spring, when it wakens into life once more. All seasons, nature in her glory. I Love the words Teddy, the images, this one goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 2:12:00 AM
Greetings Vlad. Thanks so much for your applause and enjoying my verses!!! :-)

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