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Side Effect

SIDE EFFECTS What's real; the pills or the dreams. The absence of my queen, Days without meals I think, am at lifes bream. Consciousness, but a thing To far for a starved soul of loves doing, My days are but a grave For time wouldn't bury the pain. Thinking I was brave Her absence will drain The hope that echoes Our journey to follow My pretend; the chaos War in the pillows A story with no hero Now I am just a zero For the side effect left me a widow. By Lekene Paul

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Date: 5/18/2016 12:43:00 AM
Paul, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:37:00 PM
Hi Paul Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Paul Lekene
Date: 5/24/2016 12:29:00 PM
Hey ...of cause I will love to know you...by the way I have been written movie scripts and poetry has always been my comfort ground...and I guess it's one step at a time
Date: 5/16/2016 7:13:00 PM
Paul, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Paul Lekene
Date: 5/24/2016 12:35:00 PM
Hey Linda....so basically I am from Cameroon and now I am in Germany...soo back at home it was quite challenging to tell somebody you write poems...they will laugh so hard..but however I worn a poetry competition and represented my school in the capital...so being amongst other writers makes me happy and by the way...I will love to get to know you too..cause am really interested in poetry

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