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Showers From Above

. Purple Liatris Spikes underdeveloped now Rain scarce, high heat here All suffers_trees, plants Animals must sustain sweat Rain needed at once Contest:"Any 2,4,6, or 8 Line Form" Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Marvel Godwyn

Date: 6/9/2011 8:49:00 AM

A wonderful one Sara, i enjoyed it. Marvel

James Foulk

Date: 6/8/2011 10:43:00 AM

loved this beautiful piece of Choka, good luck in contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2011 12:16:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Sara. A winner for sure!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/7/2011 3:13:00 AM

you spoil me with resplendant imagery, sara... well, it's raining here, thank God!...winning wishes to you!:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2011 9:57:00 PM

I sure know how much you want that rain and I pray it comes for you there, Sara. A chocka to let us know the plight of the land!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2011 8:30:00 PM

a wonderful write for the contest Sara.. good luck with this hearty explanation of drought land heat as we expect 100 for the next four days here..no rain in sight.. good luck in the contest my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 6:09:00 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest with this nice write with visual images, Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/6/2011 5:18:00 PM

I love the purple liatris--what a bumble bee magnet...(personal experience here....OUCH!) You are artistically painting the scene of a drought! Best to u in this contest of Brian. Gwendolen