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Laying down
crying in the shower
My conscience is back
and it's killing me

I don't ever want to 
go against it again
I can barely walk
I'm so weak in pain

It's time to just fade away
in the water
Get lost in the warmth 
and transfer the pain

I need strength
to let me mind sleep
so I can do everything
all over again tomorrow

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  1. Date: 7/25/2011 4:36:00 AM
    we have all been there , well expressed i like this, good poetry