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when I met him I was dizzy with love swept off my feet in a cloud of pure lust I had butterflies in my tummy totally discombobulated I think he used some hocus-pocus on me oh I abandoned all self control for this man those deep brown eyes had me drowning his sublime deep voice was captivating it was hopeless to fight I really should'a read the fine print he whispered sultry sweet things in my ear he caressed my hair and I told him I loved him hopelessly and I am pretty sure he felt the same because he soon asked me to marry him I do- we both said we promised to love each other forever till death do us part well I really should'a read the fine print because forever was only a few years it seems God had another set of directions and our love was to be erstwhile and fleeting it was written in the book of life and it was sudden and sorrowful then he was gone only a name engraved in stone cold to be now I am left in a labyrinth twisting and turning my forever is a forever grief I really should'a read the fine print but would it have made a difference could I have turned away from my love even if I knew the ending in that fine print that needed a magnifying glass to read- no would have loved him anyways I carry red roses to his tomb under an infinite motionless blue sky above I walk a path that winds like a river in dreams I hold him to my heart and weep for what was in the fine print _____________________________ April 12, 2016 Free Verse For the contest, I Really Should'a Read The Fine Print, sponsor, John Lawless First Place

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Date: 5/1/2016 5:34:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your win... Linda
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win:) A sad but deep write, love the lines - "I really should'a read the fine print but would it have made a difference"
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Date: 5/1/2016 9:10:00 AM
Jo thanks for the congratulations and the awesome, no it would not have made any difference, the heart knows what the heart knows ~~
Date: 4/30/2016 8:33:00 AM
Beautiful sad tale of love lost.
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:46:00 PM
Jean, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~~
Date: 4/29/2016 3:03:00 PM
Again, your words gave me goosebumps, Broken Wings...so emotional, and knowing it is true makes it even more so. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:26:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the nice comment, the congratulations and the 7 ~
Date: 4/29/2016 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations, this one is superb!Loving it!
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:00:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment !!
Date: 4/29/2016 6:56:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on your top spot Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:01:00 AM
Jan, thank you so much for the congrats and hugs xxxx
Date: 4/29/2016 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations B/W, another excellent win...
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:01:00 AM
Charlie thanks for the congratulations and the excellent !!
Date: 4/29/2016 6:21:00 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on ur 1st placement win. A meaningful write. Enjoyed............hugs
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:02:00 AM
MD, thanks for the congrats and the compliment and hugs !!!
Date: 4/29/2016 12:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement, another beautiful piece of poetry. 7++
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:03:00 AM
Brian, thank you for the congrats and the beautiful and the 7++, appreciate so much
Date: 4/28/2016 9:07:00 PM
Congrats, Broken. Excellent write and very, very deserved win. Congratulations. (I was in fact going to write on a similar theme - the euphoric "I do" followed by the realities of married life).
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:03:00 AM
Karam, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !!
Date: 4/28/2016 8:42:00 PM
BW, the contest is judged...I had a little confusion or a glitch with the new system. I like the twist at the end of this poem, a true lover's poem. Happy with the experience regardless of the "fine print". Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:05:00 AM
John, the contest theme was inspirational and I took it and flew, thanks so much for that awesome win, I am over the moon, yes I did notice the glitch, happy it all worked out...
Date: 4/28/2016 1:46:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your top win! Well deserved! :)-luloo
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:05:00 AM
Laura, thanks so much for the congrats !!
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Date: 4/28/2016 3:27:00 PM
Laura, thanks but I cannot see that this contest is judged... unless I am just not seeing it...
Date: 4/12/2016 9:40:00 AM
Heartbreaking and touching. Well said.
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Date: 4/13/2016 12:01:00 AM
Casarah, thanks so much for visiting and the comment, appreciate !
Date: 4/12/2016 8:06:00 AM
Well done Constance. Enjoyed the bittersweet write. Good luck. Peace young lady:)
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Date: 4/13/2016 12:02:00 AM
Daniel, thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
Date: 4/12/2016 4:02:00 AM
Beautifully penned with your trademark melancholy style - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 4/13/2016 12:03:00 AM
Jan, thanks for reading my poem, well you know me, if I can make it sad, I will !

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