Should I

Should I? Which way do I turn and what do, I do? I cannot decide what to do for you. Why is it so hard to do this small task? It’s not really much, not a big ask. How would I start and how would I finish? I’m not really good, my thoughts do diminish. What can it be, that I can put down? I ask heavens above, but no answers abound. Should I or shouldn’t I, I really don’t know? I’m scared of it now, I may make a show. I’ll try really hard to do my best, I know it’s all down to me. But should I enter it, in the contest? That is my dichotomy.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/15/2012 11:45:00 AM

Dear Mandy,This is so happy, I read it I'm sad this is quite good but I read it as bad. Each half of a circle inside my brain around and around 'til i read it again Superb Pen LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/24/2012 3:25:00 PM

another wide reaching subject in your poem here,

Rockman Pritts

Date: 2/23/2012 2:23:00 AM

I was going to comment on this, but then I thought, Oh NO. I understood everything you said but I really didn't know. I could write 47 words on what this meant to me, but I'd have to take back 44 and maybe another 3. Dichotomy is a pain in the brain. Don't do that to me again. But if you do then that's OK. I understand your plan. Rockman :-)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/23/2012 5:57:00 AM

do I say thank you or do I not I had worked it out but now I forgot Oh life is so hard what do iIdo I suppose a good idea is to say thank you to you x