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Shot Through the Heart

A smoking gun reveals inside clouds of truth behind one mask lies a flaming bullet in the end These eyes burning trails down the cheeks salted water from the deepest ocean wounds Holding grace an undying angel of beauty softy sings forever and always Heaven dances on wings of love

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/6/2015 11:11:00 PM

In a few short lines you have taken us on on a journey of pain and love, this is simply a tremendous poem, when one can say so much like this, well for me amazing A7

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 4:50:00 PM

ah thank you arthur dear pal heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated wishing you a blessed day sorry i am late replying

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 8:42:00 AM

Sad but a beautiful poem all the same.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 4:24:00 PM

thank you maurice for the beautiful comment sorry i am late deeply appreciated pal wishing you a blessed day

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 4:20:00 PM

thank you maurice for the beautiful comment sorry i am late deeply appreciated pal wishing you a blessed day

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2015 6:13:00 AM

- No HUGE speech from me ..... just: hugs X 99 and Love :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/3/2015 6:24:00 AM

ah so sweet of you anne lise wonderful comment dear pal smiling your avatar just laid the golden egg in my heart lol happy easter to you and your family ha ha got me smiling like mad

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/2/2015 11:32:00 PM

Oh Liam...I feel the pain. :( You have a beautiful heart...an honest and caring heart...a loyal heart. I hope it heals and loves again. Lovely write, my dear. Have a wonderful Easter....Hugs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/3/2015 5:35:00 AM

the truth eileen the pain was worth it in the end as love will always remain in the heart and grow with undying beauty justice walks humbly hand in hand with god smiling in his faith in the end wishing you and your family a very happy easter passing you a smile

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/2/2015 8:49:00 PM

Hi Liam!A very beautiful pen but mostly sad but for the last couplet.It breaks my heart to imagine anyone hurting you in any way again.Tears came out reading this 'cause I can feel your pain and you don't need or deserve anymore hurting in your life not now and not ever.You deserve all the happiness in the world.A 7+++!Truly a mighty golden pen!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Always praying for your healing.Keep the faith,just cling to him and you'll be fine.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/3/2015 5:25:00 AM

wonderful comment dorian thank you kindly dear friend wishing you and your familiy a beautiful easter in his light blessed

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/2/2015 6:44:00 PM

I hope that guardian angel helps heal all the wounds .I do believe in angels,many of which come without wings,Such a beautiful post Liam.Happy Easter dear friend.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/3/2015 5:21:00 AM

so very true charmaine angels always touch with caring words in loves beauty wonderful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed day and you and your family a very happy easter