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Short Love Affair

i walked in never thought i had a date with destiny i sat down and i was waiting for my agony you crossed my eyes and it felt like an eternity time stopped people disappeared and here was i ,in captivity i looked at you and you looked back and there were us exchanging those eye contacts you smiled and i smiled back ,god please am too young for a heart attack i listened to your chit chat am sorry i couldn't hold back ,but i never thought angels do talk sow some friends had to say hello ,i looked at you and you watched me as i go i came back and sow you alone, you welcomed me like god welcoming a lost soul i sat down and here we go again ,the agony ,the captivity ,the eternity came back like a hail of rain the moment came when you got up leaving causing me pain ,i should have seen it coming god what a shame it took me a minute to follow you outside ,i couldn't see you .. ow there you are inside your car i watched you drive vanishing through the light why wouldn't i approach you when it felt so right will i see you ,could we ever meet again ,answers delayed but in my heart you remain my sweet short love affair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2016 2:20:00 PM
nice to read this one again. LINDA
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Yasir Elneel
Date: 1/14/2017 6:12:00 AM
glad you are enjoying it, am having a drought phase these days (by days i mean the past year) so am enjoying reading since am not writing :(
Date: 1/22/2016 6:30:00 PM
YASIR, awesome poem. A pleasure to read. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 8/21/2015 9:52:00 PM
oh isn't that the way it goes?? THis reminds me so much of that song that was on the radio a long time ago? I can't remember its title any more, maybe it's name was "you're beautiful" Do you know which song I mean? I really liked this. I wrote a poem similar to this one a long time ago and it was in sonnet form!
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:28:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Love at first sight so they say..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Yasir Elneel
Date: 4/30/2015 2:27:00 AM
Thanks Sara, Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 3/6/2015 3:22:00 AM
YASIR, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/2/2015 3:04:00 AM
I love the title and the story is nice. #7
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Yasir Elneel
Date: 3/3/2015 4:46:00 AM
thanks Njeri :)

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