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short but discreet

It's crazy,
Open my eyes up to it daily anticipating a word awaiting
I'm bugging
Wanting badly but stuck being patient
It's cool just do the everyday ritual until the thought comes back with an evident statement 
Mind stuck 
Half drunk with fantisizing thoughts, brain at lunch
It ain't my stuff
Not mines to give
Someone else's din din
That one wins while I'm in the shadows watching close
Knowing how the whole scheme of things must go here's my toast......Peace

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  1. Date: 11/4/2011 6:39:00 AM
    Hard to do anything when your brain is out for lunch :) I've certainly had to wait for my mind to un-stick on occasions before the last bit of a poem will come out. (Still not my style though !)