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Shooting Star

I sit behind my window frame, Looking at the deep, blue sea. It’s dark, and I can’t quite see, But a fish is falling weak. Its scales are dimmer than the rest. Its size is tiny, not the best. It’s finally worn out to death And falls from the farthest depth. One less fishy in the sea Means one more wish for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/4/2013 8:55:00 AM
Damn, this was deep. Embrace the shooting stars. Well done! :)
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