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Shooting Blanks

Just In time corpse shine twilight sun had tainted my inner vision Twisted Shooting blanks at the rooster just supose another number feeling somber Doesn't any wonder? Torpedo Torn, The inclusion within vile pathetic outrage Shooting blanks as busy as Tyra Banks in bikini eating linguini Torpedo, remember Frank Serpico? Frantic in Autumn looking brightly colored orange In pivotal choices sense of remoseful inclusion In dirty laundry vile smell who could tell A window opens air will blow to breath in the steam, Shouts of glory to untold story morning glory; Shooting blanks getting lost in the shark tank Dellusional Insanity Romantic interlude toward vanity In tuned harmony to its hidden beasts menagerie Shooting Blanks in the phone at the door At the beach while Mrs. Polly eating a peach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/20/2012 5:36:00 PM
i feel you used to much jargon, and lead your work to lack creativity.
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Mario Vitale
Date: 1/25/2012 6:33:00 PM
who the hell cares what you think!

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