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Shoe Persona

Was once a display The sudden eye ambition Trusty appendage The hind to the heel Broken in to much appeal A preferable feel Inspired by Raul Moreno’s “still life” contest!

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 12:46:00 PM

Hi Laura... can u please check your contest entries to see if they are intact as all of mine have disappeared from my current contest... please let me know.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2010 5:16:00 AM

Great write...Much thought has gone into this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2010 8:13:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. What a nice explicit images!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/17/2010 7:15:00 PM

Wonderful words Laura and good luck in Raul's new contest.. luv his photos and this one is a bit different than the scenic ones... thankxxx for your comments on my Opulent Orchid .. but .. its not an entry.. I am sponsoring this new contest and always like to write my own poem about the contest just for poets to view what I am looking for ... as an entry... luv.. and happy Sunday... Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2010 6:57:00 PM

A double senryu.....great job, Laura! ~ Carrie