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Shish!

Shish, don’t wake the dead! The sculpted angel holds Her finger to her lips and Whispers.............. Lichens on her limbs attest To the time she has spent Tender breathing silence. About the gravestone Graver still, little trinkets Rest; gifts that stay Tranquil . The silent scene is set But in my mind I hear The sods of earth upturned By the diggers spade. I hear the sculptors Chisel chip marble Away to reveal the Angel’s skin . I hear taught ropes Slide beneath the casket and I hear the sobs of loved Ones in the breeze. .........................Shish!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2010 12:37:00 AM
your imagery and emotion made me weep as it pulled me in my own memory
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:13:00 PM
I hear the sobs of loved ones in the breeze..deep dear David.. and the Shish says much more..great poem..intense emotions..Charma
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Date: 5/3/2010 11:18:00 AM
From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing David. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:48:00 AM
sad poem, enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 5/2/2010 10:14:00 PM
Shish, this was a very nice one you have here
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:13:00 PM
Angels fascinate me... as I collect them.. I have close to 3000 now all around my home and they all have names and are catalogued... luv your fluent words to describe every line so perfectly... making this a new fav..David.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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