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Shiny Things Our whole lifelong we hunger strong for shiny things, the pain of glory, gain, and wealth’s monopoly. We have to know we won the bow, the choicest ring, tossing aside hungry pride, to live happily. Young girls with curls and pearls know passion’s intense fire. While purer hearts rot in the dark with little hope. The lust for gold and precious jewels fuels all desire. Heedlessly we choose not to lose our finer scope. Through our gaining and attaining, we beat the match. So great a weight and blessed fate it's up for theft, like women prized if they're surmised as a good catch. One winners part leaves some poor heart lone and bereft. As time goes by these things might die or gleam less bright. We ponder where's that wondrous flair seen at first sight. 11/19/16 Your best rhyming poem Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 11/26/2016 8:46:00 PM
A 7 for this great winning sonnet, Janis! Janice
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/27/2016 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. I appreciate your comments and the rating. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/26/2016 4:27:00 PM
Janis, love the poem, and the message you deliver with it. Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/26/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thanks for placing my poem. Good sonnet contest.
Date: 11/19/2016 9:05:00 AM
Beautifully, you have expressed the importance of things of eternal value:) well written, Janis:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/20/2016 1:07:00 PM
Thanks, Jo. I like the words eternal value.

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