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Shining Star

sweet honey falling from the lips you are my angel who wears the crown touched so deeply in the scent of jasmine with a beautiful heart holding out to you a rose crowning of dreams rolling the words in a daisy chain floating in the mind out younder beyond wonder if i could dance the dance in a far away distant shore i hold you under the moon like helen of troy walk the walk softly in gentleness holding hands in beauty sink a thousand ships a lover's dream falling softly in the clouds with the silver lining lost the sparkle afraid of love hurt and injured a lonely heart will forever whisper unconscious dreams all alone your solitaire i sparkle in loves skin

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Date: 9/3/2013 11:50:00 AM
excellent... PD
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/10/2013 3:34:00 AM
thank you sweetly deeply appreciated
Date: 9/3/2013 6:54:00 AM
Once i wrote a poem about Helen of the troy..if i remember well.This poem resonates so beautifully in my ear...I see you got inspired..with jasmines..daises and roses..I guess you ve been writin for quite a while cause these awesome verses flow naturally and easily from your heart..bravo
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 7:17:00 AM
LIKE AN ANGEL YOUR COMMENT SHINES IN ME BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU DEEPLY
Date: 9/3/2013 6:52:00 AM
ooozzzzzzz... touching the heart of Apollo! nice written...Elai
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 7:38:00 AM
oh what a sweet and beautiful comment thank you deeply appreciated

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