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Shining Beautiful

Hot sexy beautiful awakening Rising out from the ashes Alone breathing silently in thoughts an amazing dream begins to shine I felt the sun with her gentle fingers softly touching with her light Stepping outside yawning, birds of all kinds whistling in choir Looking across the mountains felt warm weaving love Gently brushing softly within a warm sweet gentle, kissing breeze Looking down through the valley sweeping out towards, the great Atlantic sea So many beautiful colors in blossom Looking towards the sky, white mother of pearl clouds dancing softly across vision Her color a Heavenly baby blue At that moment in time, searching inside wonderful thoughts They were sweetly kissing you far away in a distant paradise Always and forever golden treading these sands To walk hand in hand with you sweet angel of love Warm are the footprints that treads Softly landing on the deepest sands Entering the heart through the eyes of a soul Captured in this vision from inside out A picture beautiful dream sweetly smiles on you love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/5/2014 10:50:00 PM
Dear liam, Breathtaking . . . a composition of the first rank. I savored every line (and wanted more). Congratulations and bravo!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 11:00:00 PM
paul thank you dear friend for the outstanding beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 10/3/2014 2:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem with all its wonderful expressions of love and so beautifully written.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 5:28:00 PM
darlene thank you for the kind and truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/26/2014 8:56:00 PM
Excellent writing, another tribute to quintessential love!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 2:01:00 AM
thank you for your kindness truly beautiful comment god bless
Date: 9/23/2014 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day. God bless you and happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 3:15:00 AM
regina thank you ever so kindly for the blessing and wonderful comment bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 8:47:00 PM
love it... :) very sweet!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 3:06:00 AM
bless you olive sweet beautiful comment
Date: 9/23/2014 6:02:00 PM
A fantastic choice for Poem of the Day my friend. That is the kind of love one feels with a first delicious kiss with a soul mate. Takes a great poet's heart to write like that. Bravo!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 6:19:00 PM
took me quite some time love is a souls recognition of each others bond over space without touch hold the inside breathless with lots of colour yeah the kiss seals the deal such innocence takes over really is very beautiful without fault perfect thank you for your kind and beautiful words bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 4:50:00 PM
I knew it first times I laid My Eyes on this One...Congratulations Friend...Excellent write and I'm so happy that Your being recognized...This is so awesome...Be humble and Proud that is How I see You friend...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 5:40:00 PM
i am always humbled by beauty truly heartfelt beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated charlene
Date: 9/23/2014 2:26:00 PM
Liam . . . A perfect free verse write. Quite enchanting and quite beautiful. Very superbly done!! Congratulations to you Liam for Poem of the Day!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 4:13:00 PM
gary truly amazing beautiful comment touching heartfelt thank you for you kindness bless you
Date: 9/23/2014 1:59:00 PM
Excellent choice for poem of the day. Congratulations Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 2:34:00 PM
thank you ever so much richard truly wonderful comment appreciated deeply
Date: 9/23/2014 3:54:00 AM
Such a fitting honor for a wonderful poem and talented poet....cheers Tim
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 5:01:00 AM
thank you kindly tim i wrote this with every ounce of love deep down pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/23/2014 1:27:00 AM
Congratulations on being chose of the poem of the day Liam... Verlena
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 2:45:00 AM
ah thank you so kind varlena truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/23/2014 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations this is an excellent choice for poem of the day.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 1:15:00 AM
smiling maurice thank you for your kindness
Date: 9/22/2014 5:21:00 AM
Oh Liam....is there really such depth of love? You make a heart believe. Lovely poem, my dear....every line...a beautiful dream....Hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 8:35:00 AM
yeah there is such thing as love i would defend it to my last breath it never goes away that is how i write sharing my deepest thoughts thank you kindly eileen wonderful comment deeply appreciated
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 9/22/2014 6:38:00 AM
Took the words right from my mouth :)
Date: 9/22/2014 4:40:00 AM
Love makes all of us poets but to some give also wings that can fly away to lands unknown to shores undiscovered! You belong to the last category, my good friend Liam! Excellent writing!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:07:00 AM
so terribly sorry about spelling your name wrong demetrios my minds not with it these day
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:05:00 AM
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 4:47:00 AM
thank you so kindly it would be like all wishes and dreams your comment touched me deeply demrious
Date: 9/22/2014 2:05:00 AM
You always write such beautiful romantic poems, and this one is no exception. I think it is one of your best.... I really enjoyed the wonderful imagery in this piece. A lovely write, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 4:49:00 AM
thank you kindly kelly truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/22/2014 1:12:00 AM
I;m was more then impressed with Your Poem...Sir this so beautifully written...Excellent write and I hope You win an awesome reward for Your Achievement...I'm just in awe over this One...I'm saving it to My Favorites and believe Me I am very picking at My Favorites...This is a Polished work of words...
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/22/2014 5:13:00 AM
Blessing Received,May God away guide Your words,God Bless Always... Amen
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 4:53:00 AM
ah such a wonderful comment touching me so deeply brought a tear drop to my eyes thank you from the bottom of my heart truly appreciated thank you ever so much god bless you
Date: 9/21/2014 10:00:00 PM
Sounds like a sweet time in your life! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:04:00 AM
oh it was magical thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you

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