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Shes gone

Will this heart of mine ever stop beating, oh i plea to my God for the pain is great
I recall the days of joy, her beautiful eyes stared at me, and I fell deeper in love
We held hands against all, the winds bowed down to our unity
Yet today she no longer is in my scene, God where is she
I love her more and more each day
A new passion arises, and i cant even stand to grip the coming end
If it is your will, one day I shall have her back in my keep
I miss holding her, I miss kissing her day after day
I miss her voice, her laugh, will death not take me for she no longer is in my life
Walking into the unknown some say they are to find a new direction
Please come forth, dont stay away anymore I miss you
Those memories will never die, what I feel for you is eternal see you not?
What am I to do now? Forgive me I never meant to hurt you
Please forgive my tounge, I cant do this without you please come back

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  1. Date: 5/24/2010 9:23:00 PM
    your heart calles out to her so longingly in your write to her alone. she sounds like an angel with just the way you portray her.. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 12:09:00 PM
    Good write my friend.. like the way you word things.. and thanks fro stopping by to read mine

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 3:12:00 AM
    A wonderful poem but so sad Edward. I hope she is back soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 2:06:00 PM
    Edward, you are a very good poet, amazing and deep,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 12:53:00 PM
    i loved the emotion in this poem. i also loved the flow of it. you grabbed my attention with the first line and never let go. great job. looking forward to reading more.

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 12:30:00 PM
    So sad, unhappy, and miserable circumstance. Excellently scripted. Great job, Ed. Keep em comin. Rgds Ralph

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 12:22:00 PM
    Oh, Edward, your pain and longing are soulfully expressed in this poem. I do hope she returns and you are blessed with a new start. Why don't you show her your poem? Love, Carolyn