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Shepherds (Pleiades) Startled, they heard angels sing: The Saviour is born. Surprised, they followed the star to a stable where, safe in Mary’s arms, the Son of God slept. Then, in silence, they knelt and prayed. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest by Andrea Dietrich Merry Christmas & Happy New Year © 24th December 2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2017 6:14:00 PM

You told a lovely Christmas story in so few lines Paul! Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/9/2017 3:08:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I've been trying since yesterday to access Soup; finally managed to get through. I wonder whether it was just a glitch from my side! Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/6/2017 1:16:00 PM

I am pleased to be in your company Paul. I love your entry! Congratulations! 7 ; )

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2017 2:38:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. The modest shepherds played an important part in the nativity. ~ Regards // paul

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/5/2017 10:14:00 PM

Congratulations!! Paul!! Wonderful poem!! Well done my friend. Big Hugggs. Deb

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2017 12:39:00 PM

Thank you, Deborah. It was a pleasure to see your winning entry high up the list! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2017 9:09:00 PM

what a wonderful way to depict the shepherds and their actions on that holy night, Paul. Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2017 12:42:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I chose to go for simplicity. Pleased to find myself on the podium:) Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/26/2016 1:04:00 AM

Very spiritual poem, Paul. Such a momentous moment in human history told w/grace and truth. A beautiful poem, my friend. I love reading and hearing the story of the birth of the Savior anytime all the time. Ty for such a holiday gift to us. Love and joy to you this holiday season.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2016 8:41:00 AM

Your insightful feedback is much appreciated, Freddie. Thank you. May you also enjoy this festive season. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 12/25/2016 9:35:00 PM

Magnificent write lead by the Spirit... already a winner. Merry Christmas hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2016 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, for your lovely comments and encouragement. I hope that you had a lovely, blessed Christmas Day. Regards & Hugs // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 12/25/2016 9:28:00 PM

This is a wonderful pleiades Christmas poem my dear friend, Paul! Thanks a lot for sharing and have A Very Wonderful and Blessed Christmas to you and your family! Best Wishes and God bless you always! Hugs! love lots, Leonora

Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2016 8:38:00 AM

So pleased that you like it, Leonora! I hope that Christmas brought you joy and blessings. Enjoy your holidays and bicycle rides:) Love & Hugs // paul