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Shells

Encaged in eggshells, Mother bird covers, sends warmth, New life comes to world ! Life encased in shells, Armoured subtle beings , Frail alluring sail ! Flashing demure smile, Yielded with coy submission, Come out of your shell ! Written on 6/8/14 Theme- Shells Contest- Leaf, feather, shell or flake Sponsor - Andrea Dietrich

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/6/2014 7:16:00 PM

lovely haiku Dr Upma check 2nd stanza last line do you mean snail or sail? gl in contest and ty for visiting my page hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2014 10:01:00 PM

Thnx Shadow! I mean sail ,, but then I feel snail wud fit better,, let me ponder !!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2014 5:16:00 PM

This is an intriguing lovely set of haiku, Upma...but I have a favourite....the last one:) gl in the contest. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2014 10:02:00 PM

Thnx Paul ! Ur Lovely comments always encourage,, third one is my fav too!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/6/2014 9:39:00 AM

Amazing write on the animal world, Dr. Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2014 9:40:00 AM

Thnx Dr Ram !

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/6/2014 9:15:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku with amazing imagery, Dr. Upma! This looks like a winner to me, my friend!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2014 9:16:00 AM

Thnx Pandita !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2014 8:23:00 AM

- If I had to choose one .... I choose number three - They are beautiful all 3! - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2014 9:17:00 AM

Thnx Anne Lise! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/6/2014 7:55:00 AM

Awwwwww.....pretty pretty pretty! LOVED this one, Dr Upma. Good luck on contest...Sometimes I just want to crawl in a shell.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2014 9:18:00 AM

Thnx Eileen ! I just love to see those crawling ones on seashore!