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She Was Ice

First was her second born, Undisputable copy of her love; From the top of a tree he fell, And death came to him from hell. Then her first born, Who had sized her up in all; She walked into labour room, There and then she met her doom. Still death kept coming, Now to her third lovely fruit, The clone of the man she loved; Drugs and doctors,death triumphed Death yet undone, her last, Who was now mother of one; Suddenly woke up with bloody mouth, Just before the noon, death hit her loud. Now she cried no more, But walked into the darkest , No water, no food, no voice, In a short time , she was ice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/1/2015 7:01:00 PM
thank you so much for the nice comment on my comment...PD
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Date: 1/1/2015 11:50:00 PM
You are doing a yeoman Job here and it only right to give credit where credit is due,you stand taller than you peers Linda and I am always happy for this. Have a great day sweetie,,,huggs
Date: 1/1/2015 9:53:00 AM
Sad and powerful poem. Congrats to you Kayod5.
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Date: 1/1/2015 11:51:00 PM
Immense thanks Rob and have a great day...huggs
Date: 1/1/2015 8:56:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Kayod5:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Jan...huggs
Date: 1/1/2015 8:13:00 AM
- A contest that I had forgotten - Congratulations your wonderful and moving winning poem, Kayod5 - Happy New Year !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/1/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Anne for this visit...huggs
Date: 1/1/2015 7:22:00 AM
Very sad poem Kayod5. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:33:00 AM
Truly sad Brenda,thanks for this visit...huggs
Date: 1/1/2015 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on win Kayode-rajat
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Rajat...huggs
Date: 12/31/2014 9:30:00 PM
Excellent! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:32:00 AM
Thank you my friend...huggs
Date: 12/31/2014 8:54:00 PM
Kayod5, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, it is a great honour participating in your contest, I feel so happy with the Placement and can not wait to participate in the "Busted". Happy new year as well...huggs

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