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She Wants the Sweet Fire

I exist, where your heart fails to resist the lips of love on the earlobe of your aching beauty and the nipples of your curving needs, I exist in the circuit of blue veins that circle your flowering soul, the star that stirs violet sparks in the center of your solar plexus, I exist in the color of your lust when your eyes espy the kiss between truth and desire, I exist when temptation teaches your tears that your sweetest strength is surviving within the arms of my firm affection, I exist when the angel in you rises with the ecstacy of phenomenal exertion, I am alive in the heartbeat of your happiness - J.A.B.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/27/2016 5:28:00 PM

Read this a couple times, Justin, because of its sweet intensity and arousing images. I do believe that what you are describing is much more than merely existing ... but rather thriving. "nipples of your curving needs", "arms of my firm affection", "ecstasy of phenomenal exertion" ... they are masterful lines, and evocative descriptions. Just excellent.

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/27/2016 7:44:00 PM

The ultimate power source of pleasure is in knowing that the very essence of your being is raptured by the the rarest spirit of love in the world, seducing your soul with sensations simmering in the nerves of obsession. There is nothing other than thriving in electrified love Timothy, thank you so much for your passionate comment...J.A.B.

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 12/5/2015 11:14:00 PM

Amazing Justin, I'm happy I found my way back to this site. I thought of all the wonderful poets, when I was around, Linda, Andrea, Ravindra and, of course, you. The best I've ever known. Your pen is amazing as always. I see your heart is pumping as beautiful as it should, sizzling loud. With Fire! Sending all Kinds of love From Australia. San-D

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/6/2015 2:02:00 AM

You're sweet kiss of kindness and passion has left a mark upon my heart Sandy. Love is alive in me Poetess! J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/4/2015 9:00:00 PM

And it is an extraordinary joy knowing that you exist, Justin. You describe almost a spiritual love-making delicately while still powerfully assuring your love is strong "I exist in the color of your lust when your eyes espy the kiss between truth and desire" Delectable lines; it's hard to choose a favorite. The last line assures one that you are not merely a temptation; you don't exist merely to tempt but to complete, and gratify. Your fire is hot, sensuous and brave. Love always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/5/2015 3:19:00 AM

There is no more satisfying existence than that for love Laura. My heart is powerful, fueled by the passion of our perfect needs. To share love fire is to unite soul. I'm so happy that the delicacies of my love vie for your ultimate pleasure brilliant Poetess. My fire will always love the stare of your heart...Justin

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/4/2015 2:23:00 PM

Wow!! This is a master peace ,it is so beautiful and sweet....i'm so in love with the first line ...the whole poem contains so much love , desire, romance..it flows smothly ,it set my heart my soul and my body on fire burned by the flames of strong , hot love.. Lot of love and hugs ur friend dalya :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/4/2015 6:39:00 PM

Yes Dalia, the lips of love know best how to press, pull and kiss a heart into hot release. The heat of your joy is making me glow my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.