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She Walks Among the Shadows

She walks among the shadows of my house Barely even there – quiet as a mouse She has never said a word At least none that I heard She’s the image of my dear departed spouse She’s here because her spirit just can’t leave She’s here because no one has yet to grieve She looks me in the eye As if to ask me why I often chuckle – she’s so damned naïve It’s not that she was really all that bad It’s just that one night tryst that she had I couldn’t stand her sight So later that same night I accosted her with my own pentad She knows I hit her with a hammer – hard She knows she’s buried right in our backyard Yet she comes into my home And she won’t let me alone She’d like to hoist me on my own petard Ok – so maybe I’m a real louse For knocking off my dear departed spouse But that don’t give her the right To haunt me day and night As she walks among the shadows of my house Pentad – five elements of investigation – in this case – who, what, why, where, how Petard - The word remains in modern usage in the phrase hoist with one's own petard, which means "to be harmed by one's own plan to harm someone else" or "to fall into one's own trap," literally implying that one could be lifted up (hoist, or blown upward) by one's own bomb. Written 6/18/11 - 10:02 PM Honorable Mention in Ghosts contest

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Date: 6/22/2011 3:05:00 PM
Oh yea - I forgot to add that none of this really happened. My lovely wife and I will be celebrating our 40th anniversary come this December 27th. And now that I have written this poem, any disappearance of my wife will be under suspicion so I guess I am stuck with her forever. Mike
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:10:00 PM
great humour in this one, congrats on your HM It is humour right? you didn't really killer her, right????)
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Mike Dailey
Date: 6/22/2011 3:06:00 PM
Right - I claim both poetic license and the 5th on that!
Date: 6/21/2011 9:03:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Mike : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:48:00 PM
I REALLY LIKE This one. finding some good ones down here in HMs! Did you see Constance's? I love how this one was completely original and had dark humor, which is one thing I dig in movies! Congrats on that Hm. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:12:00 PM
Congrats Mike on your HM in the Ghosts contest with this superior write luv..knew when read the other night it was winning material ..enjoy special honor ...
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:15:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn, mike
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:28:00 PM
Very nice and thanks for the explantation. Congratulations. Joyce
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Mike Dailey
Date: 6/20/2011 6:16:00 PM
I had to look up those words to make sure they meant what I thought they did. Writing poems really helps improve ones vocabulary. Mike
Date: 6/20/2011 3:32:00 PM
Great poem, Mike. Congratulations on your win in the Ghosts contest! Jack and I judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
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Mike Dailey
Date: 6/20/2011 6:14:00 PM
i do feel proud to be listed among the few. thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Mike
Date: 6/19/2011 8:43:00 AM
What a take on the theme of Ghosts and thanks for the notes to get through the thoughts, mike
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Date: 6/18/2011 8:40:00 PM
super interesting write Mike and the footnotes are awesome luv.. a great entry for the ghost contest or shadows contest or both luv.. good luck luv..
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