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She Walked Away - Make Their Jaws Drop Contest

He watched her walk away that day The tears ran down his nose Her walk was frisky from behind She knew just how to pose He recalled those soft summer nights When they would ride 'til dawn He'd rub her shoulders gently then 'Til all the ache was gone Then they'd stand high on mountain tops While she would breathe the air They'd watch the world as it rolled by Without a single care Then hard times came and raised their head He was forced to sell her He was a horse breeder, that's all - Not a wealthy feller May 13, 2016, for contest Make Their Jaws Drop

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Date: 7/14/2016 2:49:00 AM
Congrats Larry, for your top placement with this wonderful verse!! ;-)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Date: 7/13/2016 5:37:00 PM
I love this and understand the feeling. Great twist. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce...I had hoped to write something that you'd like..being a distinguished Cowboy Poet!!...Larry
Date: 7/12/2016 11:18:00 PM
Larry, Congrats on your "Jaws Dropping win." Love SKAT*ace
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thanks SKAT..nice to hear from you..Larry
Date: 7/12/2016 6:18:00 PM
Love the twist at the end larry many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jan..I'm glad you liked it...Larry
Date: 5/13/2016 5:29:00 PM
This is great! I picked up on some jaw dropping intimacy.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/14/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Lukas
Date: 5/13/2016 5:13:00 PM
Very interesting and nice feeling, Larry
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/14/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you!

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