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She Waits : Triolet Contest

Black and sleek she waits, to pounce on unsuspecting foe Whiskers a tingle she anticipates, Black and sleek, she waits come little mouse she states I wont eat or hurt you,  you know, Black and sleek she, waits to pounce, on unsuspecting,  foe Penned 9 August 2013

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Date: 9/1/2013 2:48:00 PM
Seren, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 8/29/2013 12:17:00 PM
Very descriptive of that waiting cat...Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 4:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Morgan ...Seren
Date: 8/24/2013 5:38:00 PM
Seren, congratulations.... SKAT
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:40:00 AM
Hi SKAT.... thanks for the comment ...Seren
Date: 8/24/2013 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations Seren on your win with this wonderful write. I wish mine would do some pounching, I think they just play with the furry things. I enjoyed the read~Caryl
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 8:41:00 AM
LOL I dont own a cat just an old boxer bitch .....Seren
Date: 8/23/2013 6:43:00 PM
And they seem so sweet. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Joyce ...Seren
Date: 8/23/2013 1:54:00 PM
Oh.......naughty cat !!! Sounds like Sylvester to me !! :) Congratulations Seren.......such a cute poem!! (ps...hoping to hear you read next time on Drake's show !) :)
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Date: 8/23/2013 12:39:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Seren
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Date: 8/23/2013 7:14:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/10/2013 5:27:00 PM
Looking at yours again. I like it better than mine. I am thinking of doing a different triolet now!! haha
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Date: 8/9/2013 5:39:00 PM
She sounds like my Razmatazz, Seren, only my sweetie cat does not care about mice. Very enjoyable triolet.
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Date: 8/9/2013 5:41:00 AM
I tought I taw a puddy tat! I did, I did, I did see a puddy tat! And this cat was ready to pounce of that poor defenseless mouse! But in my mind, all the power to the cat, get that mouse! Where we live these outside cats love the field mice that we have, they leave little gifts of them on our doorstep every now and then! This is a spectacular write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, just like a cat too, clever! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/9/2013 1:44:00 AM
Very nice, Seren... good luck in the contest... Terry
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/9/2013 1:45:00 AM
Thx Terry.......Seren

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