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She Tries

When she hears him snore she slips out of bed. And tends to her cheeks that he’d slapped bright red. Locked in the bathroom, she breaks down and cries. For she can’t please him, even though she tries. He calls her a pig because of her weight. And then forces sex when his needs won’t wait. With a trembling hand, she swabs her split lip. And scrubs the stains from her blood-spattered slip. Pain is a part of her daily abuse. And she wants to leave, but it’s just no use. She’s petrified when the beatings occur. And yet, if she ran, he swore he’d kill her. Her entire body is bruised, black and blue. And she’s so frightened of what he might do. (Quatrain) 1/18/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2018 1:12:00 PM
Wow - way too realistic and vivid for my liking. Meaning way too well written, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 6:44:00 PM
a more common problem than many acknowledge, nice effort emile
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Date: 3/8/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thanks again Steven. Emile.
Date: 1/18/2015 5:03:00 PM
My, how terrible! In terms of doing what it was meant to do, this is a complete success of a poem. Like looking into someone's house and soul.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/18/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Isaiah, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 1/18/2015 4:51:00 PM
So sad that this happens all over the world. Every second of every day, a woman is being abused like this. You are a good poet. I hope you keep visiting me. The more I read your work, I think you will be a fave poet of mine!
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Date: 1/18/2015 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, my sincere thanks for your words of praise. Emile.
Date: 1/18/2015 4:36:00 PM
A work of importance in this day when this still happens in our world..You have put it in a way that I can feel her pain..I enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/18/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Sara, your view point is appreciated, Emile.
Date: 1/18/2015 1:01:00 PM
So deep and full of hurt... feels for the person... nice pen Emile...nad!
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Poesy Relish
Date: 1/18/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank u Emile... hugs, nad!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/18/2015 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Nadiya, you have a beautiful name and heart. Emile.

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