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She Still Believes

She once swam in seas of belief Now drowning fast in depths of grief She still believes in love She once soared high in truthful skies Her wings have been clipped by his lies She will still soar above. Chiquita Baity Sponsor Dr.Ram Mehta Tail-Rhyme Contest

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/27/2011 6:16:00 PM

You never ever give up or you will never soar with the eagles. Good write. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2011 4:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Chiquita. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/7/2011 10:16:00 PM

So happy you won with this verse. Sad in itself but the end is full of hope.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/7/2011 10:13:00 AM

Very nice Chiquita...congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/6/2011 1:13:00 AM

Congrats Chiquita on your HM in the contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy special honor luv..

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/5/2011 9:32:00 PM

WOW! A stunner! :-0 Congrats on your win. This is truly an inspirational piece and deserves a big round of applause! Cheers and smiles from Cyndi.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2011 9:23:00 PM

Nice one. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2011 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, Chiquita

Juanita Warden

Date: 8/2/2011 2:51:00 AM

True words you have written here, Chiquita...hugs..jo...thanks for comments on my poems..

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/1/2011 12:04:00 PM

Great work of vivid imageries! I hope this will be a winner.thanks for sharing

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2011 11:35:00 AM

brilliant words Chiquita and good luck in the contest.. an amazing picture in words ...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for the entry ,Chquita

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/1/2011 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Chiquita. This one should make the grade. hopeful vs-a-vis grief..great. good luck..SJ

Jl Sadberry

Date: 8/1/2011 7:38:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* “First I Wish to Say Unto Your Precious Heart That I Still Love Your Beautiful Name My Dear, Lovely & Priceless Chiquita Baity. = As For This Stirring & Soulful Piece of Your Beauties Heart Brushed Upon The Canvas In Verse == Often For Most In This Place, Shadows Come to Steal Away But, I Find Strength & Resolve Within Your Priceless Reflection; Lovely.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *