She Searches

Sorrowing she sadly searches shards surface soon sedations sends sin scurrying.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2010 10:18:00 PM

Yes a prime example of alliteration.AS you see, I am searching for poems of yours I have not yet seen. came across this cute little one. Let me find one more!

Michelle Norvell

Date: 1/23/2010 6:19:00 PM

powerful words. love this. best to you....

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/10/2010 11:57:00 AM

I posted a new poem.I think you will like it.Time For a Change.Hope all is well with you.

Constance La France

Date: 1/10/2010 12:40:00 AM

I find this very vivid in its hidden message ..and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 1/9/2010 7:17:00 AM

I love this poem. short but powerful. Makes you think to interpret. Nice. Thank you for welcoming me to poetrysoup. I did post more poems if you would like to read them. I value and appreciate your comments. Have a Great Day!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/8/2010 3:13:00 PM

Wow, Debbie... You got me reading this baby more than once, THAT'S for sure!...'sedations sends sin scurrying'...let the reader interpret, huh?...powerful stuff, mon cher! - Tim

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/8/2010 9:04:00 AM

Great job you've done here, Deborah! Have a very nice 2010! Your family name sounds Italian, am I right? Love, Gert

Elaine George

Date: 1/7/2010 6:05:00 PM

The power of the letter 's' in a master's hand to convey such profound ponderings. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2010 5:31:00 PM

Interesting S write that I could go several different ways. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara