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She Once Was

Their once was a girl who was so blue Everything had changed once she met you She knows that now she is not alone You bring her joy, you bring her light At night she no longer has fears, her face is dry no more tears She longs to stay with you for years, and years Everything has changed sense the day I met you Now I can't imagine a single day without you I am not alone, nor am I scared Not anymore, now that I have you Their was a girl that was so blue, but now she has grown thanks to you.

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Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 2:33:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Courtney. :)

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 2:41:00 PM

Courtney, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 9/25/2016 9:57:00 AM

What a lovely uplifting write Courtney - you sound so happy its good to see you posting again you have had a long break away from soup:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2016 2:17:00 AM

Courtney, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/25/2016 1:07:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love