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She Moves Across the Room

morning sun you dance on my windowpane as I squint hard to etch your smile in my head my body floats light as feather in your rain perhaps the sting in my eyes and clammy palms indicate that you are so surely real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/8/2017 5:30:00 PM
Very good. Hard to say so much in so few words.
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Date: 10/27/2016 2:53:00 PM
Alicia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/25/2016 2:51:00 PM
Alicia,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/20/2016 10:49:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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Date: 10/20/2016 6:52:00 AM
Lovely ...
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