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She Is More

She is, exactly what he wanted to see His erotic fantasy Every teenage boys playboy bunny dream Look at how you come onto me Lost, destroyed soul is all i will ever see U disgust the innermost, deepest feelings in me She is the beauty queen The one from your dreams She doesn't even look like she bleeds Imagine how she screams... Perfect without a flaw Take her on the wall Have her spread all over the floor Dont even close the door Look at what you all came here for Destroy her pride Till shes got nowhere left to hide Give her your might once more Until she cannot take it anymore Look into the eyes of all your lies Realize every hurt you've given in your life This is your whore & now shes all bloody and sore The same girl next door, that u begged for more You've burnt your soul to the core A deed done With blood on your hands Listen, to your screaming fans Shes just one of those, that you used to love You stole all her fairy dust and turned it into lust.

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Date: 4/2/2015 8:06:00 PM
Dani, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2014 1:49:00 PM
Hi Dani, this is such a deep powerful piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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Date: 9/18/2014 4:21:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Dani - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2014 5:51:00 PM
Dani, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/17/2014 3:17:00 AM
It is great to see a community of such great passionate writers. Thank you for the kind words =] It makes me feel blessed and even more excited to read and write more! xx

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