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She Is For Me

When I look at her I know she has the key, I don’t get it, why can’t she see? Her eyes so blue, her hair so fair, There’s no one else that could ever compare I see her run like a leopard, She makes me want to be a little intrepid The beauty, the wonder, Now I’m sure that she is for me A jewel doesn’t even come close to her beauty, A diamond’s not even in her league I could make a whole book series about why I like her, Without even having to try An amazing masterpiece, a piece of art, She’s something that not even Di Vinci could create A rose or violet not even close, Now I’m sure that she is for me She could be the fire for my fuel The smile on my face, The motivation for my race I can’t bear the the wait Until the day where I can call her my soulmate All she needs to say is yes, Before all of this becomes a mess I need her, I want her, Now I’m sure that she is for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/10/2016 4:57:00 PM
That's a real soulmate you have there, Caleb!! ;-) Congrats for having this romantic piece featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!
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Date: 5/4/2016 10:08:00 PM
This is a beautiful feeling for a beautiful emotion, your write has vivid expressions that seem to glow off the page. Thank you for sharing. Keep the smile on your face.
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Date: 4/9/2016 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful Romanticism you have here, Caleb! Welcome to Poetry Soup. :)
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:44:00 PM
Very romantic poem Caleb. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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Date: 4/6/2016 4:56:00 AM
Hi Caleb, Nice first post. Welcome to poetry soup.Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs
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Date: 4/6/2016 1:22:00 AM
Caleb, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Caleb Thompson
Date: 4/6/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thanks heaps. By the way your poems are amazing.

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