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The way she twists her hair and places back that wayward wisp behind her ear, the way she checks her face in every mirror. How she shimmers to the ladies' room to re-apply her lipstick, or she lingers irresistibly as you politely hold the door ajar. The way she glides so smoothly; you're helpless as you fall beneath her rule, under her spell you're both the best man and the fool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/19/2016 10:37:00 PM
Breath-taking lines, the anticipated emotions are intense and gripping. Last line was perfect, so is the title.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/20/2016 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Cynthia! much obliged. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 3/19/2016 5:41:00 PM
beautiful sensual imagery Keith:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/19/2016 7:41:00 PM
I am most grateful to you! Best wishes, Keith

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