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She

She like a fresh dew bestows nourishment to the graceful morning dove in a luscious meadow filled with tall fluorescent green grasses and yellow, blue, and white wildflowers, quenches all my worldly thirsts. She like the pure white swan which swims majestically on a sea of gold reflecting the powerful rays of the sun consumes me with all her beauty She like a great bountiful mountain rising sharply into the endless cobalt sky accented with opulent cumulous clouds lifts me to greater heights She like the burnished northern star, the glistening Polaris, guiding the wayward ship to it's port, leads me to my one true home She is my heart, my mind and my soul She is my meaning, my substance, my know She is my sun, my star, my moon She is my spirit, my vision, my muse

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Date: 4/9/2015 3:51:00 AM
WOW! I'm sure she is flying high with that praise. What a powerful, beautiful, and lovely piece you've written for her, Tim. That's love...
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Date: 4/9/2015 3:44:00 AM
You deserve both dinner and dessert for such an enchanting poem.You must be in love with your muse ,cuz your verses are magic..A favourite Timothy : )
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Date: 4/9/2015 2:07:00 AM
imagery at its best, tim... wonderfully quilled!.. huggs
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Date: 4/9/2015 1:46:00 AM
'She' inspires you to write beautiful verse Tim:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/8/2015 10:17:00 PM
A heartfelt, beautiful dedication to your muse, Tim. I love the delicate quality of your lines. Free verse, yet liltingly lyrical in a natural flow...A 7 and a fav! Blessings for your household! Kim :)
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Date: 4/8/2015 9:12:00 PM
"SHE"is truly a magnificent tribute and read, the power of love shines throughout. Thank you Tim for sharing the beauty of She with us all. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 9:15:00 PM
Thank you have a fabulous evening Tim

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