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Sharing Flavoites I guess you never had it all vanilla mountains melting down almond peaks thrust ten feet tall caramel dripping all around cherries riding chocolate waves raisins ever rising sprinkles found in frigid caves our tongues just realizing The waffle cone In tries its best to hold on all that flavor and you can barely stand the test then lick your lips, to savor every morsel that I taste it renders you my rival but this means more than Ice cream now it's more like my survival I hurry in the licking now I claim it's melting fast You hurry too, you know what's true this stuff's not made to last But when we're near the end what's melted must be sipped Now the sweetest part of all Is when I taste your lips To My loving Wife may we forever be able to share a bite

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Date: 10/13/2015 5:19:00 PM
Sweet love
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/15/2015 4:35:00 PM
I knew this would melt your heart, you 'ol softy. Thanks Timmy
Date: 10/13/2015 12:21:00 AM
Awesome poem and very special sentiment.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/15/2015 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Mark, I get plenty of inspiration
Date: 10/12/2015 11:54:00 PM
A 7, and sorry about the typo in last comment!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/15/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thanks again Laura
Date: 10/12/2015 11:52:00 PM
This is so sweet :) and creative, too! I like bed your most excellent poem, Jerry!!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/15/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Laura, these kind are always fun to write

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